Hop on Over, I'll Be There for You
Bunny Hop
Bunny Go
Along the trail
Off to the show
He hears a sound
Stops on the trail
He hops some more
Into a pail
He is so fat
And round you see
He can't get out
Needs help from me
I gently push
the bucket over
He hops right out
Into the clover
He looks once more
As if to say
Thanks my friend
You made my day
I sit and think
He's fat like me
Glad for friends
To set him free
Friends give me hope
Support my goal
To lose the weight
And make me whole
Like my friends
You make me think
To eat healthy
Watch what I drink
Bunny hop
Bunny go
Thanks my friend
Enjoy the show
~ Brian Russell ~
©Copyright 2009 Oldman's Poetry Corner ~ All rights reserved
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Bunny Hop
Bunny Go
Along the trail
Off to the show
He hears a sound
Stops on the trail
He hops some more
Into a pail
He is so fat
And round you see
He can't get out
Needs help from me
I gently push
the bucket over
He hops right out
Into the clover
He looks once more
As if to say
Thanks my friend
You made my day
I sit and think
He's fat like me
Glad for friends
To set him free
Friends give me hope
Support my goal
To lose the weight
And make me whole
Like my friends
You make me think
To eat healthy
Watch what I drink
Bunny hop
Bunny go
Thanks my friend
Enjoy the show
~ Brian Russell ~
©Copyright 2009 Oldman's Poetry Corner ~ All rights reserved
Hi Brian! Bear enjoyed the poem much and was so glad the bunny was helped out of that bucket! A neat portrayal of friends walking together in the Lord, and a wonderful photo match. Nice blog also! :-)
ReplyDeleteLove the little bunnies...just don't like them eating my flower beds....
ReplyDeleteLove the rhyme and meter of this! I'm glad the bunny had help--this is a lovely inspiring piece of poetry! ^_^
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this--nice poem with a good message, too. I also like your pictures! God Bless!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and pic!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun bunny poem! The meter even suggests bunny hops.
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